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Ian Taniels | HouseOfChapters's avatar

"Nobody hears the splash."

Very visual style, you pull the reader in and paint a clear (but dark) picture. Wonderfully written.

Serials of The Week #16 here you come!

Matthew Holvey's avatar

Call me hooked. Love the visual of the loose hair strands flying around

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